<P>这news hunter 是不是前几次的yy?谢谢提供新闻和原文链接,希望以后做到翻译准确。</P>
<P>指出两处比较关键的翻译错误:</P>
<P>1)The shooting happened <FONT color=#ff0000>shortly before midnight Saturday</FONT> in the 2400 block of Windy Hill Road in Marietta.</P>
<P>事件发生时间在<FONT color=#ff0000>周六半夜之前</FONT>,不是<FONT color=#0000ff>周六凌晨</FONT>左右。也就是说,是在周六晚上,快要到周日时发生的。这家店是酒类专卖店(Liquor Store),在Georgia周日不能卖酒。</P>
<P>2)The store clerk then grabbed his own own, and exchanged gunfire, police said.</P>
<P>(原文有错(typo),应该是The store clerk then grabbed his own <FONT color=#ff0000>gun</FONT>, 。。。)</P>
<P>警方说店员<FONT color=#ff0000>掏出自己的枪</FONT>,之后双方交火。</P>
<P>不是像翻译的那样:“结果店员反应迅速,<FONT color=#0000ff>抓住枪反过方向,结果枪射中抢劫犯</FONT>。”</P>
<P>要不这店员还真太神了。<!--925--></P>